Hi my name is Masi and I am from Waikowhai Primary School the senior and the middle school went to Cameron pools we went in different groups every one wearing life jackets and went to the big pool. some people were sacred and some wasent I wasent because I already went in the big pool before I couldn't wait to go in the big pool I was rushing to go finally I was in the big pool. The life jacket helped us float on our back if we tried to float on our tummy it will automate float on your back it helps you not to drown.
Kia ora. I am Logan from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you described how it felt
I learnt that if you try to float on your stomach you will automatically go on your back
Maybe you could reread your work and see if it makes sense
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Logan
Thank you Logan for commenting on my blog thanks for telling me that I needed to reread my work.
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