Friday, 12 June 2020

My Creative Writing

Hi last week at week 7 Te waka ako,  were starting on our creative writing. My creative writing is about two people and there names were called willy and billy and they are twins then they to get a ball but they couldn't but two people came up and there names are Sammy and Danny saw them and they told them should help and they said yes. If you want to look at my story click on the URL to the link for my story. Thank you for looking at my blog bye.

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora. I am Logan from St Mary’s School.
    I really liked how you told me the twins names
    I learnt that you can always ask
    Maybe you could finish your sentence
    Please visit my blog
    here

    Mā te wā
    Logan

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  2. Logan thank you for commenting on my post. Thank you for your feedback and I will finish my sentences.

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